Payment Failed: Card Expired. Update Card Information.
Payment failed: card expired. Update card information to continue renting.
From: DailyUXWriting -- Scenario: The user is trying to rent a car using an application but the credit card on file has expired. Challenge: Write them an error message so that they can correct the problem. Headline: 30 characters Body: 45 characters -- Headline: Payment failed: card expired Body: Update card information Why I chose this: Clarity: The headline immediately communicates the problem—“Payment failed: card expired” is direct and leaves no room for confusion Action-Oriented: The “Update card information” body text provides a straightforward next step Conciseness: Both the headline...