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Johnny Santamaria @johnny603

30-Character Headlines & Score Updates In Sports Fan Communication

30-char headline & 45-char body: '[Team], TOUCHDOWN!' '[Team] [score] - [opposing team] [score]' Clear, concise & relatable sports update

From:
DailyUXWriting
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Scenario: A sports fan is at a wedding while their favorite team plays against their arch-rivals. Their team scores.
Challenge: How would you, quickly, let the sports fan know about the latest play, the current score, and the key players? Write it.
Headline: 30 characters max
Body: 45 characters max
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Headline: [Team], TOUCHDOWN!
Body: [Team] [score] - [opposing team] [score]

Why I chose this:

Clear and Direct: immediately informs the fan about the team’s success
Concise: Does not overload the user with other information on scoring. I do not know anything about spor...